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Title: This will make you cry... I got in an email today!!
Post by: AmyTrivitt on August 11, 2009, 09:17:55 pm
 

Her hair was up in a ponytail
Her favorite dress tied with a bow.
Today was Daddy's Day at school,
And she couldn't wait to go.
 
But her mommy tried to tell her,
That she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand,
If she went to school alone.
 
But she was not afraid;
She knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates
Of why he wasn't there today.
 
But still her mother worried,
For her to face this day alone.
And that was why once again,
She tried to keep her daughter home.
 
But the little girl went to school,
Eager to tell them all.
About a dad she never sees
A dad who never calls.
 
There were daddies along the wall in back,
For everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently,
Anxious in their seats.
 
One by one the teacher called,
A student from the class.
To introduce their daddy,
As seconds slowly passed.
 
At last the teacher called her name,
Every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching,
For a man who wasn't there.
 
"Where's her daddy at?"
She heard a boy call out.
"She probably doesn't have one,"
Another student dared to shout.
 
And from somewhere near the back,
She heard a daddy say,
"Looks like another deadbeat dad,
Too busy to waste his day."
 
The words did not offend her,
As she smiled up at her Mom.
And looked back at her teacher,
Who told her to go on.
 
And with hands behind her back,
Slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child,
Came words incredibly unique.
 
"My Daddy couldn't be here,
Because he lives so far away."
But I know he wishes he could be,
Since this is such a special day.
 
And though you cannot meet him,
I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy,
And how much he loves me so.
 
He loved to tell me stories
He taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses,
And taught me to fly a kite.
 
 
We used to share fudge sundaes,
And ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him,
I'm not standing here alone.
 
 
"Cause my daddy's always with me,
Even though we are apart
I know because he told me,
He'll forever be in my heart"
 
With that, her little hand reached up,
And lay across her chest.
Feeling her own heartbeat,
Beneath her favorite dress.
 
And from somewhere in the crowd of dads,
Her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter,
Who was wise beyond her years.
 
For she stood up for the love
Of a man not in her life.
Doing what was best for her,
Doing what was right.
 
And when she dropped her hand back down,
Staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft,
But its message clear and loud.
 
"I love my daddy very much,
He's my shining star.
And if he could, he'd be here,
But heaven's just too far."
 
You see he was a fireman
And died just this past year
When airplanes hit the towers
And taught Americans to fear.
 
But sometimes when I close my eyes,
"It's like he never went away."
And then she closed her eyes,
And saw him there that day.
 
And to her mother's amazement,
She witnessed with surprise.
A room full of daddies and children,
All starting to close their eyes.
 
Who knows what they saw before them,
Who knows what they felt inside.
Perhaps for merely a second,
They saw him at her side.
 
"I know you're with me Daddy,"
To the silence she called out.
And what happened next made believers,
Of those once filled with doubt.
 
Not one in that room could explain it,
For each of their eyes had been closed.
But there on the desk beside her,
Was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.
 
 
And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,
By the love of her shining bright star.
And given the gift of believing,
That heaven is never too far
 
They say it takes a minute to find a
special person, an hour to
appreciate them, a day to love them, but
then an entire life to forget them.
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Post by: micang213 on August 19, 2009, 03:17:58 pm
Absolutely beautiful.  We sometimes forget about the loved ones. Thank you for posting this. :thumbsup:
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Post by: Ducklow on August 19, 2009, 03:39:10 pm
 :crybaby2:
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Post by: klutzycutie on August 19, 2009, 03:48:57 pm
i agree it made me cry to!!
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Post by: annakarryn on August 19, 2009, 04:34:06 pm
Yes it did make me cry  :(

So beautiful, I am going to read it to my kids.

Thanks for sharing.
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Post by: dohc_fwd_touge on August 19, 2009, 09:21:32 pm
wow... sometimes it makes you think twice about everything.
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Post by: Graeth on August 19, 2009, 10:10:05 pm
wow.....
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Post by: jessicajoy78 on August 19, 2009, 10:37:36 pm
That really gave me chills.  Absolutely beautiful.  I recently lost my mother, so it hit home.  Thanks for sharing that!
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Post by: flotowngolfer on August 20, 2009, 05:38:46 am
I cried a little. And it gave me chills. None of this would have been a big deal, but I am at work, so I feel a bit dumb.
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Post by: Fyrekisser on August 20, 2009, 06:32:19 am
Awwww  :crybaby2: That was sooo sweet
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Post by: trop8cana on August 20, 2009, 09:14:19 am
Awwww  :crybaby2: That was sooo sweet


My thoughts exactly  :crybaby2:
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Post by: smadesy on August 20, 2009, 09:26:26 am
Darn tears. Gets you every time.
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Post by: ktmrider30 on December 17, 2009, 10:53:16 pm
Wow that got my eyes to water very nice. :crybaby2:
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Post by: klutzycutie on December 18, 2009, 12:53:18 am
ive read it before and love reading it each time

it still brings tears to my eyes each time to
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Post by: beau2625 on December 18, 2009, 07:30:32 am
 :'( haven't seen that one before. thanks for sharing.
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Post by: Shutmeup3030150 on December 18, 2009, 08:40:02 am
This is so sad...It makes me think about all the people I have in my life today that I can't even begin to imagine losing...
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Post by: ahunter300 on December 18, 2009, 08:56:53 am
Fireman Memorial New York City
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Post by: Azanne07 on December 18, 2009, 06:17:39 pm
I have read that before but thanks for sharing.
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Post by: anguyen21 on December 21, 2009, 03:26:49 am
Thank you for sharing it is a beautiful piece of work.  :)
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Post by: trujillo33 on December 21, 2009, 11:47:16 am
It was good..really touching!!
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Post by: lotsomoney on December 21, 2009, 02:44:56 pm
so haertbreaking god bless america, our home sad home :crybaby2: :crybaby2:
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Post by: jongarton on December 21, 2009, 02:45:49 pm
That is a touching story but what about all the lives that are lost everyday! Thank you for posting this You just gave me a wonderful idea about bumper stickers and feelings!!!! anyone ever lose anyone they wish they could spend more time with???
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Post by: boomer2433 on December 21, 2009, 02:56:58 pm
I have a 8 yr old daughter that lives 1500 miles away and that did make me cry. At least I get to talk to her everyday though.
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Post by: Wren28 on December 21, 2009, 05:06:17 pm
anyone ever lose anyone they wish they could spend more time with???

Yes, I lost my mother in March of this year. She went suddenly with no warning.

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Post by: Ducklow on January 25, 2010, 03:56:06 pm
i love this
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Post by: montanamama07 on January 25, 2010, 04:11:05 pm
Thank you for posting this.  I lost my highschool sweetheart in the first group of Marines sent out after 9-11, so I understand the loss.  I remarried to one of my best friends from highschool and together we have two children, a boy and girl.  He is a Petty Officer in the US Navy and is stationed in Afghanistan.  It is my fear that my daughter will have to face this day in preschool without her Daddy, so this really touched me as it is still truely a fear for so many kids today.
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Post by: koolharleymama on January 25, 2010, 07:43:08 pm
Thanks,Hon! I needed a good cry! I too had a family member lost that fateful day! Thanks for helping us all never to forget! God's Speed,Dear One!!!
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Post by: wfelagai on January 25, 2010, 09:55:07 pm
aww i am so glad that i read this. it really touch me! i am going to share this story with others, thank you for making my day.
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Post by: klvcaudillo on February 25, 2010, 09:37:53 pm
You're right it did make me cry.  Thanks for sharing.
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Post by: Storm61115 on February 28, 2010, 07:09:10 pm
yes this did make me cry. i had to keep going back to it coz each time i read a little i would get tears in my eyes again. took me a while to read this. but it is beautiful and it is touching. the girl was a smart kid to say those things about her dad. i remember that fateful day. i was a sophmore in high school and i remember watching the news all day in my 4 classes. we hardly did ne thing that day. my friend and i were partners and we did a project about that day and we got an A++. i still have it somewhere i would think..9 years later.
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Post by: Galactoid on February 28, 2010, 07:43:16 pm
Been a long time since i cried. This didn't succeed, though it certainly made me come close.
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Post by: gesus on February 28, 2010, 08:00:10 pm
I liked it not bad not bad at all
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Post by: mgint on March 02, 2010, 06:16:39 am
wonderful message tells us not to judge others get to know people first
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Post by: acurtsinger2 on March 02, 2010, 07:44:32 am
very beautiful and sad all rolled into one. :crybaby2:
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Post by: wbarth on March 02, 2010, 07:54:33 am
oh my God... I'm more sensitive  because I'm pregnant   :crybaby2:
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Post by: jkhanson on March 03, 2010, 07:54:06 am
Wow....what a powerful message.

Be sure to tell those you love that you love them today.  You never know when Heaven will knock.
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Post by: Tere2 on March 07, 2010, 12:23:51 pm
I just read this for the first time. I don't know why I over looked it all that time. Anyway it almost made me cry, too.
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Post by: glbish on March 07, 2010, 12:28:00 pm
IT ALL DEPENDS ON WHAT IS IN THE EMAIL.
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Post by: briannajeanxo on March 07, 2010, 12:31:09 pm
i love this poem! but it does make me cry every time i read it.  :(
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Post by: tigerlilly01 on March 08, 2010, 08:42:17 am
Thank you for sharing that with us.   :angel12:   God Bless you.
It makes you stop and realize what is really important in life.
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Post by: swogden on March 08, 2010, 08:59:21 am
Brought tears to my eyes.  Thanks for sharing.
Brings back memories of 9/11 that are still unbelievable.
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Post by: rlshank09 on March 08, 2010, 10:23:20 am
That is so beautiful and sweet, it reminds me to remember our dear loved ones not as how they left , but how they lived their life.  :'(
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Post by: paigesuftko on March 08, 2010, 01:05:28 pm
that was long but good!
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Post by: JakeJumpsHigh on March 08, 2010, 10:51:41 pm
 :crybaby2:
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Post by: marcar1008 on March 24, 2010, 04:00:10 pm
 :'( that was beautiful. I love children and I think children should never be questioned about their missing parents. this litte girl was so brave she gave a lesson of love.

It hurts not to have a parent, but it is a blessing they gave life to a special child. If you know a child who is missing a parent always, always give them love.
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Post by: maximum71390 on April 06, 2010, 03:28:37 pm
very good poem
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Post by: smokeejo on April 06, 2010, 10:00:38 pm
omg that is so sad! i cried. :crybaby2:
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Post by: lher0277 on April 07, 2010, 11:31:38 am
I loved it, it did make me cry, thanx for posting it was the sweetest poem I've ever read.
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Post by: Cuppycake on April 07, 2010, 12:15:20 pm
I loved it, it did make me cry, thanx for posting it was the sweetest poem I've ever read.

Bah why did ya have to bump this lol. I cried again. :'(