A poem written by me...

[ButterflyWings]

 This is a poem I wrote for a very good friend of mine,I usual don't share my poetry but I think it would be good for me to do..Hope you enjoy it..
  Tormented

Dying inside thats what I see
She puts on a happyface and dances around for me
The happyface is not what I see
Always makes sure shes there for me
Why can't you open up and share some pain with me
No she just hides it from me
Pick up the bottle
Kill the pain
Pick up the drugs kill the pain
Pick up the knife
Kill the pain
Hide the cuts Hide the shame
Why does she think she can run from the pain
Doesn't she realize how much we are the same
How I hide all my shame
Alone
I know how alone she feels
Fear
I fear I will lose her
More than she is already lost
Gone ,Gone Away
Why couldn't she see I needed her to stay.

[mc1962]

Very nice indeed.

[ButterflyWings]

Very nice indeed.

   Thank you so much ..that means alot

[ButterflyWings]

  Enjoyed your poem, even your username sounds poetic...you seem to be a naturally creative, inspiring and uniquely talented individual!!  Thanks for posting!!

Aww thanks hun.Yeah I love being creative..And thank you so much for your comment you made my day..And I chose my username cause I love nature and butterflies are so majestic and free..You have inspired me to not fear showing my creative side..

[charmaine56]

Make more poems for us please. 

[chickauhtree]

Very nice!

[Elizabethar]

Nice poem enjoy it alot.

[ButterflyWings]

Nice poem enjoy it alot.

Thanks hun I am am glad you enjoyed it

[sands01]

I really liked your poem. It is something I feel I can relate to. Thank you for sharing.

[ButterflyWings]

I really liked your poem. It is something I feel I can relate to. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks sweetie..I am glad to share and glad you could relate to it

[tantricia44]

This is a poem I wrote for a very good friend of mine,I usual don't share my poetry but I think it would be good for me to do..Hope you enjoy it..
  Tormented

Dying inside thats what I see
She puts on a happyface and dances around for me
The happyface is not what I see
Always makes sure shes there for me
Why can't you open up and share some pain with me
No she just hides it from me
Pick up the bottle
Kill the pain
Pick up the drugs kill the pain
Pick up the knife
Kill the pain
Hide the cuts Hide the shame
Why does she think she can run from the pain
Doesn't she realize how much we are the same
How I hide all my shame
Alone
I know how alone she feels
Fear
I fear I will lose her
More than she is already lost
Gone ,Gone Away
Why couldn't she see I needed her to stay.

The poem is very nice but I need to ask is this poem about some one else or is it about you? I'm kind of worried. 

[ButterflyWings]

This is a poem I wrote for a very good friend of mine,I usual don't share my poetry but I think it would be good for me to do..Hope you enjoy it..
  Tormented

Dying inside thats what I see
She puts on a happyface and dances around for me
The happyface is not what I see
Always makes sure shes there for me
Why can't you open up and share some pain with me
No she just hides it from me
Pick up the bottle
Kill the pain
Pick up the drugs kill the pain
Pick up the knife
Kill the pain
Hide the cuts Hide the shame
Why does she think she can run from the pain
Doesn't she realize how much we are the same
How I hide all my shame
Alone
I know how alone she feels
Fear
I fear I will lose her
More than she is already lost
Gone ,Gone Away
Why couldn't she see I needed her to stay.

The poem is very nice but I need to ask is this poem about some one else or is it about you? I'm kind of worried. 

This poem is about a friend hun a very close friend who I could not save.

[vhouston57]

Great poem but what wrong seems to be some issues

[vhouston57]

ummmm it kind of sad

[Debrabencomo]

very personal. good job